2. Re-write your topic sentence if necessary. Plan out the supporting sentences with bullet points. You can keep them in note form for right now. Make sure your bullet points have a quote.
Example:
sample topic: Improving maternal health
Topic sentence: Around the world, pregnant women are faced with dangerous situations that can prevent a healthy delivery of their child.
- talk about lack of access to doctors
- talk about poverty and how this impacts pregnant women
- statistic about how many women die from childbirth in developing countries vs. developed countries from UN web site
- discuss how women in sub-Saharan Africa are at the most risk
- point out which countries have had recent success with improving the health of mothers
3. Continue with your group work-we have one more work session before break. What are your group goals for December? After Winter break, you will have about a month to finish your work.
*Remember e-mail communication between group members is always polite. All group members should respond to all e-mails, even if it's only to say "okay."
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